The best day of my summer is when sierra introduced me to Quanah because shes awesome, funny and really spectacular to be around!!! :) thats right i used a word i cant pronounce :P anyways.... another day i liked is when i hung out with my friends like all day and went camping! it was fun so be jealous... bye(:
you really need to revise this. there is no explaining or detail at all
ReplyDeleteA great moment deserves more imagery. What were both wearing? Where did you meet? What was your conversation? etc.
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